Orbital Decay is headed for the Old Story’s Home.
It made the rounds in 2008 without success and the rejections I received had a darker tone.
Orbital Decay is a story about an early suicide, told from the perspective of a middle-aged man. Not all it’s rejections offered comments, but those that did were unanimous.
“The writing is solid but what a bummer ending.”
Even so, I believe it’s a good story; so I’m posting it here. Give it a read, if you like, and let me know what you think.